Monday, April 23, 2007
Short Story
My hopes for my paper is to capture the accounts of a young british woman in a busy city of England. I want to reveal her work, family, friends, and relationships at a particular moment in her life. I was going to throw in a love triangle, but that seems a little much. I will still try to put it in the story. I plan on using subtle or sarcastic humor and brash language. PG-17?
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I'm not familiar with British literature/humor but I believe you did an excellent job at portraying the mindset of a busy British woman. The introduction is good and the dialog throughout really helps move the piece--she swears an awful lot, almost too much it seems at time--still affective though. Sometimes the story line gets a little hard to follow just because of the length of the story but other than that I believe it's pretty solid.
Sounds interesting. I hope I'll have the opportunity to read it at some point. Especially if that love triangle made the cut!
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